Romascanu, Dan (Dan | 9 Nov 2011 17:01
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AD review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-06.txt

Hi,

Please find below the AD review of
draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-06.txt.

This document is in a good shape, but a new version is needed in order
to clarify and fix some of the issues raised in the review. 

The comments below are marked T (Technical) and E (Editorial)

T1. smicng in relaxed checking reports one compilation error: 

C:\bw\smicng\work>smicng gbond-tdim.inc
E: f(gbond-tdim.mi2), (820,4) Row "gBondTdimServiceEntry" may not have
columns with MAX-ACC ESS of read-write if any column is read-create

*** 1 error and 0 warnings in parsing

T2. In section 5.4: 

   The agent SHOULD align the beginning of each interval to a fifteen
   minute boundary of a wall clock.  Likewise, the beginning of each one
   day intervals SHOULD be aligned with the start of a day.

Where does this requirement come from? If the source is another standard
I suggest to provide  it. What is the rationale? What happens if this
requirement is not / cannot be met because for example the agent does
not have access to a 'wall clock'?

T3. In the DESCRIPTION of the GBondTdimServiceIndex TC: 
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Edward Beili | 9 Feb 2012 20:44
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Re: AD review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-06.txt

Dan,
Thank you for your comments.

Please see the clarifications/actions inline below (my comments are marked with [EB]):

I have just submitted the next draft (07) of the gbond-tdim-mib.

Regards,
-E.

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>Subject: [Adslmib] AD review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-06.txt
>
>Hi,
>
>Please find below the AD review of
>draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-06.txt.
>
>This document is in a good shape, but a new version is needed in order to clarify and fix some of the issues
raised in the review. 
>
>The comments below are marked T (Technical) and E (Editorial)
>
>T1. smicng in relaxed checking reports one compilation error: 
>
>C:\bw\smicng\work>smicng gbond-tdim.inc
>E: f(gbond-tdim.mi2), (820,4) Row "gBondTdimServiceEntry" may not have columns with MAX-ACCESS of
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