29 Jun 2011 06:46
Pete's review of 4871bis
Pete Resnick <presnick <at> qualcomm.com>
2011-06-29 04:46:06 GMT
2011-06-29 04:46:06 GMT
Folks, I've been reviewing 4871bis for the IESG review on Thursday. I've got a huge number of comments. Some of them (e.g., the first two below) are quite trivial or simple issues that I expect you'd either have no issue with or that I'm happy to ignore; some of them are clearly not trivial at all. I have not entered a ballot position yet, and I haven't sorted through all of the comments to decide if any are worthy of entering a DISCUSS, but I suspect that some of them are. I therefore wanted to post this to the WG list so you all get an idea of what I'm thinking about. Tomorrow I'll spend some time cleaning these up and sorting them by category instead of by order of the document. I apologize for the lateness of this review; it's probably something I should have done a long time ago. Comments: 1. I find the use of the word "INFORMATIVE" throughout the document superfluous. No other word (e.g., NORMATIVE) is used in its place. I think they should all be removed. They serve no purpose. 2. The ABNF "0*" construct is not normally used. Why not just "*"? 3. Section 2.7: I don't understand what the word "module" means in this context. It sounds like some sort of specific implementation, not part of a protocol. I don't know what it means to deliver values to a module. 4. Section 3.4.4:(Continue reading)
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