Gonzalo Camarillo | 4 Nov 2009 12:34
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Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt

Hi Elwyn,

thanks for your review. Answers inline:

Elwyn Davies wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> [Apologies fhe late review. I missed the assignment while I was away on 
> holiday.]
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 17 October 2009
> IETF LC End Date: 14 October 2009
> IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
> 
> Summary: Almost ready.  Couple of minor nits only.
> Major issues: 0
> 
> Minor issues: 2
> ss4 and 5:  Technically the BNF in these sections is ABNF (since it adds 
> to that in RFC 4566). It should therefore be described as such and refer 
> to RFC 4234.

I fixed this while addressing the discusses this document got.
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Elwyn Davies | 4 Nov 2009 20:49

Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi Elwyn,
>
> thanks for your review. Answers inline:
>
> Elwyn Davies wrote:
>> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
>> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
>> _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
>>
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>>
>> [Apologies fhe late review. I missed the assignment while I was away 
>> on holiday.]
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review Date: 17 October 2009
>> IETF LC End Date: 14 October 2009
>> IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
>>
>> Summary: Almost ready.  Couple of minor nits only.
>> Major issues: 0
>>
>> Minor issues: 2
>> ss4 and 5:  Technically the BNF in these sections is ABNF (since it 
>> adds to that in RFC 4566). It should therefore be described as such 
>> and refer to RFC 4234.
>
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Gonzalo Camarillo | 6 Nov 2009 08:21
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Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt

Hi Elwyn,

I have made the change you suggested. I will be submitting a new 
revision right after the blackout period.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

Elwyn Davies wrote:
> Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
>> Hi Elwyn,
>>
>> thanks for your review. Answers inline:
>>
>> Elwyn Davies wrote:
>>> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
>>> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
>>> _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
>>>
>>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>>> you may receive.
>>>
>>> [Apologies fhe late review. I missed the assignment while I was away 
>>> on holiday.]
>>>
>>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt
>>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>>> Review Date: 17 October 2009
>>> IETF LC End Date: 14 October 2009
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Gmane