4 Nov 2009 12:34
Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt
Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo <at> ericsson.com>
2009-11-04 11:34:44 GMT
2009-11-04 11:34:44 GMT
Hi Elwyn, thanks for your review. Answers inline: Elwyn Davies wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > _http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > [Apologies fhe late review. I missed the assignment while I was away on > holiday.] > > Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc3388bis-03.txt > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 17 October 2009 > IETF LC End Date: 14 October 2009 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) - > > Summary: Almost ready. Couple of minor nits only. > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 2 > ss4 and 5: Technically the BNF in these sections is ABNF (since it adds > to that in RFC 4566). It should therefore be described as such and refer > to RFC 4234. I fixed this while addressing the discusses this document got.(Continue reading)
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