20 Jun 2012 17:39
Re: Comments for <I-D of Publishing the "Tao of the IETF" as a Web Page>
SM <sm <at> resistor.net>
2012-06-20 15:39:56 GMT
2012-06-20 15:39:56 GMT
Hi Abdussalam, At 03:51 20-06-2012, Abdussalam Baryun wrote: > I refere to the IETF process of: preparing the I-D by WG, >Community-accepting, Submitting, and IESG-approval. The new >Tao-update-process of the draft is not including the community. The >IETF process in draft is as : individual preparing, individual submit >to Editor, Editor decides and accepts, Editor submitting, and >IESG-approval. > >The above are two different IETF submission streams, which may be >consistent if we include *the community* in accepting submission to >IESG. RFC 4844 discusses about RFC Series and the streams used by the various communities to publish a RFC. One of those streams is for IETF Documents. In the I-D being discussed, the document will be published on a web page. The IESG will choose Paul Hoffman as the editor. I gather that those details are not a problem. draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02 mentions that the changes will be discussed on an open, Tao-specific mailing list. The second paragraph of Section 2 and the third paragraph are not so clear about changes, i.e. the editor accepts proposed changes and the IESG accepts proposed changes. Are you suggesting that the changes should be discussed in a Working Group or something else? BTW, RFC 4677 should be moved to Historic instead of Obsolete. Regards, -sm(Continue reading)
>Can you say what was "not so clear"? I absolutely want that bit to
>be clear. Proposed text is appreciated here.
I would not put too many administrative details in a RFC as it will
be read literally. Here's some suggested text which I'll leave to
author discretion:
The Tao will be edited by one person who is chosen by the IESG.
The changes can be discussed on the tao-discuss <at> ietf.org mailing list.
The editor submits the revised version of the Tao to the IESG for approval.
The revised version is published by the IETF Secretariat at
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